Elevator Pitch 3
The feedback that I received from my last pitch was mostly positive. The energy and message that I brought was positive and reflected well on me as an entrepreneur. The best feedback I got was too look more to the business that I plan on developing and less on what I have done thus far. What I did to change my pitch based on this feedback was to look at the content of my pitch and make sure that it related strictly to my business plan and not on other unimportant things. The pitch was a lot easier this time and was easy to shoot. Third time is the charm!
Nicholas, this is really great! I got a good idea of what your business is and a little bit on how you are qualified to start this, I love the improvements! These are minor details, but next time try talking a little faster and also if you really wanted, hand gestures and facial expressions would be good. This is simply to keep the attention of the listener and to exude confidence as you speak.
ReplyDeleteHey Nicholas!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this latest video. I thought you did a really good job in the latest video at staying very on topic. Next time you can try going a little faster presenting your topics. Another point to improve on would to be even more dynamic. Other than that I thought you presented your ideas very logically and clearly. Good job!
Nicholas, I liked your video a lot. It was businesslike in that you didn't smile all that much but you remained confident and serious throughout the pitch. I do agree with Julia that hand gestures could be used. I read today that showing your hands, even if you don't move them, makes you more trustworthy to other people. Trust is very important while trying to make sales. Best of Luck!
ReplyDeleteHey Nicholas,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in your latest elevator pitch. In comparison with your last pitch, I thought your pitch was far more focused. Overall, I thought you completed the elevator pitch successfully and enjoyed it thoroughly.